5.3 Responses to Colonialism

  • 1 Vocab Activity
  • 10 Activities
  • 9 Articles
  • 1 Video
  • 4 Visual Aids
  • 1 Assessment

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Introduction

Colonialism spread rapidly across much of the world during the long nineteenth century. But people who were “colonized” didn’t just allow themselves to be victims. All across the colonized world, people developed new strategies, and adapted old ones, to survive in new systems of colonial control. They pushed back, often quietly or carefully, sometimes through violent rebellion, and in many cases by studying and writing, coming up with ideas like “dual consciousness” to explain how colonialism affected them. Many others cooperated with colonial authorities, exploiting new power structures to their advantage. The historical thinking practice of causation will be key for understanding how people understood, supported, and resisted colonialism.

Learning Objectives

  1. Utilize the historical thinking practice of causation to assess the 1857 uprising in India as a response to colonialism.
  2. Understand and evaluate how communities responded to increased industrialization and the expansion of colonialism.
  3. Examine the different direct and indirect strategies used to resist colonialism.
  4. Use graphic biographies as microhistories to support, extend, or challenge the overarching narratives from this time period.
  5. Create and support arguments using historical evidence to evaluate the most significant causes of the partition of Africa into colonies during this era.
  6. Analyze claim and focus in historical writing.
Activity

Vocab – What’s My Word?

Preparation

Vocab Activity
Activity
Activity

Purpose

In this activity, you will be assigned a mystery vocab word, and your job is to go around the room and ask enough questions of your classmates to try to figure out what the word is. You’ll have to use your questioning and deduction skills to figure out the word. In many ways, you are being asked to take context clues to help you figure out your word. This is a great way to determine if you really understand the words from the unit, or if you need more practice.

Process

You are going to play the vocab game, “What’s My Word?” And, it’s exactly as it sounds—you’re going to be assigned a vocab word, but you won’t know what it is. Your job is to ask your classmates questions about your word until you correctly guess what it is.

Your teacher will explain how the game works. Once everyone is ready, your teacher will place a vocab word, written on an index card, face down on your desk. DO NOT LOOK AT THE WORD. Instead, when your teacher says “go,” hold up the card to your forehead, with the word facing out, and then go around the room asking questions until you’ve figured out your word.

Once your whole class has figured out their words, think about and discuss the following questions with your class:

  1. What kinds of questions did you ask?
  2. What types of questions most easily led you to figure out your word?
  3. How might these types of questions help you figure out unfamiliar words that you encounter in the course?

Activity

Causation – Indian Uprising

Skills Progression:

Preparation

Activity
Article

Purpose

Understanding the causes and consequences of a historical event can be complicated. Often, the history of an event can be told from multiple perspectives. In this activity, you’ll analyze the causes of the 1857 Indian Uprising to investigate how and why this rebellion took place when and where it did. By doing so, you’ll see how historical events and processes can be interpreted in different ways, not only by those involved in the actual events, but by the historians who analyze the events long after they’ve taken place. Historians not only bring their own perspectives to the analysis, they apply historical thinking practices differently as well.

Process

In this activity, you’ll read an article about the 1857 Indian Uprising against the British East India Company. Indian soldiers (called sepoys) rose up in protest against the regulations imposed by the British company, regulations that violated their religious beliefs. Using the information in the article, you’ll then complete the Causation Tool, which is included in the Causation – Indian Uprising worksheet. Next, you’ll use the information from the tool to construct a causal map with both the causes and consequences of this event. You’ll also answer follow-up questions that ask you to evaluate this event from multiple perspectives. Finally, you’ll write a one- to two-paragraph response for a causation prompt.

Causation can be messy! There are almost always multiple causes of any historical event. To further complicate matters, any cause can be seen in a different light depending on your perspective of the event. Imagine that you and your classmates lead an uprising against the school administration to push back the time that you start school each morning. You decide to take over the school and chain yourselves to the front doors at 6 a.m. in protest. In the process of doing so, school property is damaged. The police are called, and you’re all arrested for trespassing and vandalism. The school administrators and you and your fellow classmates each tell your version of events to the police. Do you think the accounts of what happened would be the same, or would they all reflect different perspectives of the event in question? It’s likely there would be many versions of the event, its causes, and its consequences. Historical analysis of the uprising that occurred in India in 1857 is no different. As a class, have a brief discussion about whether you think it might be difficult to assess the causes of an event when there are often multiple perspectives as to why that event took place.

Then, your teacher will either hand out or have you download the Causation – Indian Uprising worksheet and the “1857 Indian Uprising” article. As you read the article, take notes or highlight the causes and consequences of this event. After everyone has finished reading, share the causes and consequences you found with another student. Then, use your causes to complete the Causation Tool.

After everyone has completed the tool, you’ll create a causal map using your causes. Make sure to leave room for the consequences of this event. The event in the middle of the causal map should be labeled as 1857 Indian Uprising. If you need a refresher on how to create a causal map, you can review one of your previous causation activities, in particular Causation – Revolutions from Unit 2. Share your causal map with the class and discuss the similarities and differences you see as these are presented.

Then, your teacher will ask you to answer the following questions. Be prepared to share your answers with the class.

  1. What were the reasons for the uprising from an Indian perspective?
  2. What were the reasons for the uprising from a British perspective?
  3. How did nineteenth-century views about imperialism and “civilization” play a role in these different perspectives?

Finally, working on your own, write a one- to two-paragraph response to this prompt: What was the most significant cause AND what was the most significant consequence of the 1857 Indian Uprising? Remember to use the acronym ADE to help determine historical significance.

Your teacher will collect your worksheets and paragraphs and use them to assess how your causation skills are progressing.

Article

1857 Indian Uprising

Vocab Terms:
  • convent
  • garrison
  • mutiny
  • sepoy

Preparation

Article
Activity

Summary

The East India Company was a British business that ruled much of India as if it were an independent imperial power. In 1857, many Indians, especially soldiers technically employed by the EIC, rose up in rebellion. Historians debate why this uprising happened at this time. Was it a result of dissatisfaction in the military? Religion? De-industrialization? After the rebellion was put down, the British government ended EIC’s rule in India and established direct colonial rule of India from London.

Purpose

The Unit 5 Problem asks: How were modern empires created, administered, and contested in the Long Nineteenth Century, and how did these tensions help to create the world we live in today? In this lesson, we look at the “contested” part of the problem. This article provides important evidence at the national level to help you respond to the Unit Problem. Colonized peoples often resisted colonial rule. In some cases, like the 1857 uprising, they did so violently. As you read consider: How did colonialism and colonial resistance reshape communities?

Process

Preview – Skimming for Gist

Fill out the Skimming for Gist section of the Three Close Reads Worksheet as you complete your first close read. As a reminder, this should be a quick process!

Key Ideas – Understanding Content

For this reading, you should be looking for unfamiliar vocabulary words, the major claim and key supporting details, and analysis and evidence. By the end of the second close read, you should be able to answer the following questions:

  1. Who ruled much of India in 1857?
  2. What was the doctrine of lapse?
  3. Where did most of the East India Company’s soldiers come from? How did the EIC treat them?
  4. What was the “spark that lit the fire” for the 1857 uprising?
  5. What, according to the author, were some of the other explanations for the uprising?
  6. What was the outcome of the uprising?

Evaluating and Corroborating

At the end of the third close read, respond to the following questions:

  1. Why does it matter whether historians call the 1857 uprising a “mutiny,” a “revolt,” or a “war of independence”? Why do titles matter?
  2. This revolt failed, but some historians think that it was the beginning of the Indian national independence movement. Why do you think the memory of this revolt would have lived on in the minds of Indians living under direct British rule?

Article

Azizun of Lucknow (Graphic Biography)

Preparation

Article
Activity

Summary

This is a biography of Azizun, a nineteenth-century courtesan (Tawa’if) turned anti-colonial fighter in northern India. The British saw the status of Tawa’if as backward, but she found it empowering. The British annexation of her home, the Kingdom of Awadh, and the expulsion of the king in 1856, threatened her status and livelihood. By becoming a leader of the resistance to British rule, Azizun showed how some women fought colonial rule.

Purpose

One of the important questions we ask in this unit is how colonized people—so-called “colonial subjects”—reacted to empire. Azizun’s story helps us to understand resistance to colonialism through an individual’s eyes. In particular, it is evidence for you to consider when evaluating the idea of a ‘civilizing mission’ as a justification for colonial rule.

Process

Read 1: Observe

As you read this graphic biography for the first time, review the Read 1: Observe section of your Three Close Reads for Graphic Bios Tool. Be sure to record one question in the thought bubble on the top-right. You don’t need to write anything else down. However, if you’d like to record your observations, feel free to do so on scrap paper.

Read 2: Understand

On the tool, summarize the main idea of the comic and provide two pieces of evidence that helped you understand the creator’s main idea. You can do this only in writing or you can get creative with some art. Some of the evidence you find may come in the form of text (words). But other evidence will come in the form of art (images). You should read the text looking for unfamiliar vocabulary words, the main idea, and key supporting details. You should also spend some time looking at the images and the way in which the page is designed. By the end of the second close read, you should be able to answer the following questions:

  1. Where did Azizun live, and what was its status in 1856?
  2. What was a Tawa’if? What did the British believe they were?
  3. How did Azizun react to the occupation of Awadh in 1856 and the rebellion that broke out in 1857?
  4. How does the artist use the image in the last panel to demonstrate that Azizun was breaking the rules, both of Awadh and British ideas, about how women should act?

Read 3: Connect

In this read, you should use the graphic biography as evidence to support, extend, or challenge claims made in this unit of the course. On the bottom of the tool, record what you learned about this person’s life and how it relates to what you’re learning.

  1. How does this biography of Azizun support, extend, or challenge what you have learned about the “civilizing mission” and about resistance to colonial rule in this period?

To Be Continued…

On the second page of the tool, your teacher might ask you to extend the graphic biography to a second page. This is where you can draw and write what you think might come next. Here, you can become a co-creator of this graphic biography!

Article

Responses to Industrial Imperialism

Vocab Terms:
  • delta
  • evade
  • highland
  • mutiny
  • notable
  • relatively

Preparation

Article
Activity

Summary

Industrial imperialism was powerful, with its modern weapons and technologies and a vast economic reach. But it didn’t completely dominate the lives of most colonial subjects. They found ways to respond using the tools that they had—by hiding, avoiding, using deception, and sometimes cooperating carefully. Examples from three regions of Southeast Asia demonstrate these strategies.

Purpose

The Unit 5 Problem asks: How were modern empires created, administered, and contested in the Long Nineteenth Century, and how did these tensions help to create the world we live in today? In this lesson, we look at the “contested” part of the problem. This article provides important evidence about a variety of strategies and experiences from Southeast Asia.

Process

Preview – Skimming for Gist

Fill out the Skimming for Gist section of the Three Close Reads Worksheet as you complete your first close read. As a reminder, this should be a quick process!

Key Ideas – Understanding Content

For this reading, you should be looking for unfamiliar vocabulary words, the major claim and key supporting details, and analysis and evidence. By the end of the second close read, you should be able to answer the following questions:

  1. How did people in Southeast Asia use corn and cassava as tools of resistance?
  2. What does the author argue were some of the goals of colonial subjects?
  3. How did some inhabitants of Hanoi use rats as tools of resistance?
  4. How did French education in Indochina backfire in some ways, according to the author?
  5. How and why did some aristocrats in the Dutch East Indies try to accommodate Dutch rule?
  6. Why was stealing a curtain an act of resistance by Raden Mas Adipati?
  7. What were some strategies that people in the Southeast Asian highlands used to avoid taxation and labor?

Evaluating and Corroborating

At the end of the third close read, respond to the following questions:

  1. The author of this article lists many types of actions and activities as acts of resistance. Do you agree that these were all acts of resistance? What does resistance mean to you?
  2. Think about the people in this article using the communities frame. What were their goals? Were they trying to build new communities? Maintain old ones? Resist imperial communities? Or do something different?

Video

Asian Responses to Imperialism: CCWH #213

Vocab Terms:
  • imperialism
  • modernization
  • nation-state
  • reform
  • treaty
  • tyranny

Summary

Asian intellectuals were quick to identify the rise of European industrial power and imperialism. They proposed responses ranging from copying Europeans to rejecting their innovations, with lots of room in between for debate. When viewed through the work of Asian writers and philosophers, we can get a different perspective on what empire looked like and how it was understood.

Asian Responses to Imperialism: Crash Course World History #213 (12:54)

Key Ideas

As this video progresses, key ideas will be introduced to invoke discussion.

Purpose

The second half of this unit focuses on responses to colonialism, and many other articles and videos in this lesson have looked at how people responded physically or through actions. This video examines the responses of Asian intellectuals. It will help you to prepare an answer to the Unit Problem, which focuses not only on the creation and operation of empires, but also how people responded to them.

Process

Preview – Skimming for Gist

As a reminder, open and skim the transcript, and read the questions before you watch the video.

Key Ideas – Understanding Content

Think about the following questions as you watch this video.

  1. Why do we often end up relying on sources from intellectuals when studying imperialism?
  2. What did Asian intellectuals recognize as the principal reason for European dominance at this time, according to John Green?
  3. How does John Green describe the “modernization” response that many Asian societies followed?
  4. What strategy did Kang Youwei suggest that China follow in response to European industrial might?
  5. What important political transformation did Sayyid Jamal Ad-Din Al-Afghani propose?
  6. Why was Japan not a great model for many other Asian states in this era, according to John Green?
  7. What non-Western sources of strength did Sayyid Jamal Ad-Din Al-Afghani and Liang Qichao propose for Asian regions?

Evaluating and Corroborating

  1. Why is it important to look at modernization and imperialism from perspectives other than the colonizers? How does it cause us to revise our understanding of imperialism—in terms of communities, networks, and production and distribution?
  2. This video deals with people who did a lot of thinking. These intellectuals wrote and argued for new forms of resistance, but not many of them got out in the streets and drove pirate vans or became resistance fighters. Of the types of resistance you’ve read about so far, which seems most effective?

Article

Dadabhai Naoroji (Graphic Biography)

Preparation

Article
Activity

Summary

Dadabhai Naoroji was born in what was then British India. Despite being a subject under colonial rule, Dadabhai went on to become very successful. He helped to establish organizations such as the Indian National Congress and was even the first Asian elected to Parliament. Even so, he understood the pain and suffering that was caused by colonialism first hand.

Purpose

This biography provides an unusual perspective—that of a man who was at once very successful, and also a subject under British colonial rule. This perspective will help you gain understanding of colonialism, therefore providing context to the Unit 8 problem: What can we learn when we study the Cold War and decolonization together? Studying this biography through the communities frame will help you to think about the effects of colonialism on various scales, including how it affected those living under colonial rule, as well as the greater global impact of colonialism.

Process

Read 1: Observe

As you read this graphic biography for the first time, review the Read 1: Observe section of your Three Close Reads for Graphic Bios Tool. Be sure to record one question in the thought bubble on the top-right. You don’t need to write anything else down. However, if you’d like to record your observations, feel free to do so on scrap paper.

Read 2: Understand

On the tool, summarize the main idea of the comic and provide two pieces of evidence that helped you understand the creator’s main idea. You can do this only in writing or you can get creative with some art. Some of the evidence you find may come in the form of text (words). But other evidence will come in the form of art (images). You should read the text looking for unfamiliar vocabulary words, the main idea, and key supporting details. You should also spend some time looking at the images and the way in which the page is designed. By the end of the second close read, you should be able to answer the following questions:

  1. When and where was Dadabhai Naoroji born?
  2. According to the biography, what did Dadabhai do in 1855? What was he doing in the 1870s?
  3. What ‘first’ did Dadabhaiachieve in 1892? What issues did he use his new power to support?
  4. What does the biography suggest Dadabhai did in his life that gave him the power to stand up for the rights of Indian people?
  5. How does the artwork show us the differences between Dadabhai’s two contrasting worlds?

Read 3: Connect

In this read, you should use the graphic biography as evidence to support, extend, or challenge claims made in this unit of the course. On the bottom of the tool, record what you learned about this person’s life and how it relates to what you’re learning.

  1. What evidence does Dadabhai Naoroji’s provide to help you to evaluate both the way that empires controlled people’s lives? What does it tell you about the possibilities of challenging that control? How does that evidence support, extend, or challenge what you have learned about empire in this period?

To Be Continued…

On the second page of the tool, your teacher might ask you to extend the graphic biography to a second page. This is where you can draw and write what you think might come next. Here, you can become a co-creator of this graphic biography!

Activity

CCOT – Labor to Colonialism and Responses

Skills Progression:

Preparation

Activity

Purpose

In this activity, you’ll learn how to identify, categorize, and evaluate changes and continuities. By focusing on the changes and continuities that took place from one unit to the next, you’ll further develop this historical thinking practice and will apply your historical knowledge to formulate thesis statements for two CCOT prompts.

Practices

Comparison, causation, contextualization, writing
As with the other CCOT activities that you’ve encountered, this historical thinking practice combines elements of comparison, contextualization, and causation. You’ll compare events and processes that took place from Unit 4: Labor and Society to Unit 5: Imperialism, Colonialism, and Responses (c. 1750–1914), expand the context for the changes and continuities of this period, and begin to consider what caused these changes to take place. In addition, you’ll be writing thesis statements in response to two CCOT prompts.

Process

By now, you should be familiar with the CCOT Tool (which is included in the worksheet) and practice. Your teacher will start by either handing out or asking you to download the CCOT – Labor to Colonialism and Responses worksheet, and then breaking up the class into small groups of three to four students. Once you’re in groups, follow the tool directions and start by adding the timeframe. Then, identify the continuities and changes that took place from Unit 4: Labor and Society to Unit 5: Imperialism, Colonialism, and Responses (c. 1750–1914). Remember that you can use any of the articles and videos from these units to help you identify continuities and changes—the Units 4 and 5 overview articles are a good place to start!

Once your group has identified the continuities and changes, write these on sticky notes (one change or continuity per note). Then, decide if the continuities and changes you identified are positive or negative, and place them on the graph in the tool.

Next, your group will join up with another group to share your continuities and changes and reasons for their positions on the graph. Members of each group are allowed to reposition the other group’s sticky notes as long as you justify your reasoning.

Then, return to your original group to complete the remaining questions on the tool. Be prepared to share your most significant continuity and change. Remember that you can use the acronym ADE to determine historical significance. Consider if most people’s lives were affected by these changes and continuities (amount); if people living in this time period were deeply affected by these changes and continuities (depth); or if these changes and continuities were long lasting (endurance).

After your group has completed the tool, work together to craft thesis statements in response to the following CCOT prompts:

  • To what extent were the changes that occurred from c. 1750 to c. 1914 positive?
  • To what extent were the continuities that occurred from c. 1750 to c. 1914 positive?

Write each of your thesis statements on a large piece of paper and post your paper on the board. Then, walk around the classroom and read other groups’ thesis statements. You’ll write at least two comments on the thesis statements of at least three other groups in the class. One comment should be a suggestion for how to improve the thesis statement and the second comment should be a counterclaim—an argument against the thesis statement.

Finally, you’ll write down the thesis statement that you think best answers or addresses one of the prompts. Note that it cannot be your own group’s thesis statement. Then provide a one- to two-sentence explanation for why you believe the thesis statement you chose best answers the prompt. Hand this in as an exit ticket so your teacher can use it to assess your understanding of CCOT and the content addressed in this activity.

Activity

Geography – Unit 5 Mapping Part 2

Preparation

Activity
Visual Aid
Visual Aid
Visual Aid
Visual Aid

Purpose

This activity will provide additional evidence to help you respond to the Unit Problem: How were empires created and contested in the 19th century, and how did that shape our world today? You will reflect on what you’ve learned during this unit by exploring the geography of industrialization and empire. You will examine three political maps to evaluate change and continuity over time and review your predictions from the Part 1 activity. Finally, you’ll investigate a map highlighting connections between industrialization and imperialism as you discuss how these connections reshaped our world.

Process

This activity begins with an identification opening in which you’ll identify 10 colonies of industrial empires in the year 1914 CE. Next, you will compare political maps for the years 1750, 1871, and 1914, evaluating how empires changed through the long nineteenth century. Finally, you will reflect on your guesses and predictions from the Part 1 activity and write a response to a prompt about the connections between empires and industrialization.

Step 1

Identify the colonies associated with the numbers on the black-and-white map of the world in 1914 CE and record your answers on the worksheet. Be sure to indicate both the name of the colony and the empire that controlled it.

Step 2

In small groups, examine the 1750, 1871 and 1914 Political Maps. Compare these three maps and provide three examples of how empires changed over the long nineteenth century. Pay special attention to the changes in the two particular empires for which you made predictions in the Part 1 activity. How close were your predictions?

Step 3

Now, look at the Industrialization and Imperialism Thematic Map. You saw this map in the Unit 3 mapping activity, but this time around you should pay special attention to the annotations on the map, which make explicit connections between industrialization and imperialism. As a group, discuss something you’ve learned in this unit that could be added as an annotation on this map, connecting industrialization and imperialism.

Finally, in small groups, prepare a short paragraph or bullet list in response to the prompt below:

The industrial imperialism of the long nineteenth century is often referred to as “the new imperialism.” Using the maps you encountered in this unit as evidence, explain how industrialization created a new kind of imperialism. Provide at least two specific historical examples of significant changes during the long nineteenth century.

Activity

UP Notebook

Preparation

Activity

Make sure you have the UP Notebook worksheets that you partially filled out earlier in the unit.

Purpose

This is a continuation of the UP Notebook activity that you started in this unit. As part of WHP, you are asked to revisit the Unit Problems in order to maintain a connection to the core themes of the course. Because this is the second time you’re working with this unit’s problems, you are asked to explain how your understanding of the unit’s core concepts has changed over the unit. Make sure you use evidence from this unit and sound reasoning in your answers.

Process

Fill out the second table on your partially completed worksheet from earlier in the unit. Be prepared to talk about your ideas with your class.

Article

Dual Consciousness

Vocab Terms:
  • colonialism
  • color line
  • consciousness
  • dual consciousness
  • psychology
  • racism

Preparation

Article
Activity

Summary

Colonialism had a lasting impact on people’s minds as well as their economic and physical well-being. In the last years of the Long Nineteenth Century, networks of intellectuals across the colonized world began to share ideas about this impact. W.E. B DuBois and Anna Julia Cooper in the United States, and Frantz Fanon in North Africa, were among the philosophers who participated in these networks. Among their most important ideas was the concept of dual consciousness.

Purpose

The Unit 5 Problem asks: How were modern empires created, administered, and contested in the long nineteenth century, and how did these tensions help to create the world we live in today? In this lesson, we look at the “contested” part of the problem. This article looks at networks of colonial subjects who contested empire by focusing on the concept of dual consciousness. You may also note how this concept is still relatable to the world in which we live today.

Process

Preview – Skimming for Gist

Fill out the Skimming for Gist section of the Three Close Reads Worksheet as you complete your first close read. As a reminder, this should be a quick process!

Key Ideas – Understanding Content

For this reading, you should be looking for unfamiliar vocabulary words, the major claim and key supporting details, and analysis and evidence. By the end of the second close read, you should be able to answer the following questions:

  1. What is W.E.B. DuBois’ concept of “double” or “dual consciousness”?
  2. How did Booker T. Washington and W.E.B. DuBois differ in their approach to the problems of people of color in the United States?
  3. What was Anna Julia Cooper’s particular contribution to this debate?
  4. What was the first Pan-African Congress in 1900?
  5. What did Frantz Fanon believe about the concepts of blackness and race?

Evaluating and Corroborating

At the end of the third close read, respond to the following questions:

  1. What does this article tell us about colonial subjects and networks in the Long Nineteenth Century?
  2. Can you use the concept of dual consciousness to help explain anything about our world today?

Activity

Writing – Claim and Focus Part 2

Preparation

Activity
Article

Download the Sentence Starters worksheet (optional)

Purpose

In this writing activity, you’ll circle back to the first row of the WHP Writing Rubric: Claim and Focus. You’ll progress from analyzing an essay for its major claim and focus, to identifying and revising these elements in a student-written essay. The move from analysis to application should help you advance your claim-making skills so you can generate your own well-crafted thesis statements and claims. This is an important skill to practice—a clear thesis statement can be thought of as the backbone of a well-written essay.

Process

It’s another writing activity! And although you’ve done it before, you are once again going to take a look at claim and focus in a student-written essay. However, this time you’ll get an essay that needs some improvement.

With your class, first review what makes a claim good and an essay focused. Then, get ready to read an essay that didn’t exactly get high marks for claim and focus. Your job is to revise and improve upon claim and focus in the essay. Take out the Writing – Claim and Focus Part 2 worksheet and the WHP Writing Rubric for reference and follow the directions. Your teacher may also hand out a Sentence Starters worksheet to give you some ideas about how you might revise some of the writing in this essay.

First, locate the major claim/thesis statement in the essay, then revise it. Next, look for focus in the essay, and then revise at least two sentences where the focus could be improved. It’s important to follow the instructions in order, since it will be difficult to improve the focus without a clear and convincing major claim to connect to. Keep in mind that improving focus might mean adding more text and not just revising what is there.

Finally, look for one counterclaim in the article. You didn’t do this before, but it is part of claim and focus as described in the rubric: “The essay maintains a strong focus on defending a directly stated position, using the whole essay to support and develop the claim and counterclaims while thoroughly addressing the demands of the prompt.” Although a counterclaim doesn’t support the claim, it’s an important addition to essays because it does recognize when something deviates from a trend and anticipates where a reader might push back on the major claim.

Assessment

DBQ 5

Preparation

Assessment

PDF / 10

DBQ 5external link
Article

DBQ Prompt: Evaluate the most significant causes of the partition of Africa into colonies c. 1880–1914 CE.

Have the Comparison, CCOT, and Causation tools available (find all resources on the Student Resources page)

Purpose

This DBQ is another opportunity to get a sense of your progress in developing your historical thinking and writing skills. Additionally, writing DBQs will help prepare you to be successful on the written portion of standardized tests.

Process

Day 1

It’s time for another DBQ. This time, you’ll be thinking about colonialism. The DBQ prompt is: Evaluate the most significant causes of the partition of Africa into colonies c. 1880–1914 CE. Start out by using the Question Parsing Tool to help you figure out what this question is really asking, so you can write an appropriate response.

Take out the DBQ and skim the documents quickly. Then, pick the thinking tool you want to use to help you analyze the documents (comparison, causation, or CCOT). Once you’ve picked a tool, read each document a bit more closely and write down or underline the information you think you might use in your essay, along with any additional sourcing you have time for. Write your ideas on your chosen tool as you work through the documents.

Next, create a major claim or thesis statement that responds to the prompt. The notes you have taken should help you form a defensible thesis statement.

Finally, it’s time to contextualize. As you likely know, all historical essays require this. If needed, you can use the Contextualization Tool to help you decide what to include.

Day 2

This second day is your writing day. Feel free to use your tools and notes from any prewriting work you completed as you craft your essay response. Make sure you have a copy of the WHP Writing Rubric available to remind you of what is important to include in your essay. And don’t forget to contextualize: Think of the entire time period, not just the time immediately preceding the historical event or process you are writing about. Your teacher will give you a time limit for completing your five- to six-paragraph essay responding to the DBQ.

Activity

DBQ Writing Samples

Preparation

Activity

Purpose

In order to improve your writing skills, it is important to read examples—both good and bad—written by other people. Reviewing writing samples will help you develop and practice your own skills in order to better understand what makes for a strong essay.

Process

Your teacher will provide sample essays for this unit’s DBQ prompt and provide instructions for how you will use them to refine your writing skills. Whether you’re working with a high-level example or improving on a not-so-great essay, we recommend having the WHP Writing Rubric on hand to help better understand how you can improve your own writing. As you work to identify and improve upon aspects of a sample essay, you’ll also be developing your own historical writing skills!